ಮೊದಲ ಪ್ರೇಮ
ನಿನ್ನ ಮೊಗದ ಮೊದಲ ನೋಟ
ನಾಟಿ ನನ್ನ ಮನದ ತೋಟ
ಏರಿ ಹೃದಯ ಬಡಿತದೋಟ
ಅದುವೆ ಮೊದಲ ಪ್ರೇಮ ಮಾಟ
ಕಣ್ಣ ಬಳಸಿ ಸಲಹೋ ರೆಪ್ಪೆ
ಹಣ್ಣ ಬಳಸಿ ಕಾಯೋ ಸಿಪ್ಪೆ
ನಿನ್ನ ಬಳಸಿ ನಾನು ನಿಲ್ಪೆ
ಮೊದಲ ಪ್ರೇಮ ಸಾಕ್ಷಿಯಂತೆ
ದಡವು ನದಿಗೆ ಉಗಮದಿಂದ
ಕಡಲ ಸೇರೋ ವರೆಗೂ ಕಾಯುವಂತೆ
ನನ್ನ ಮೊದಲ ಪ್ರೇಮವನ್ನು
ಕೊನೆಯವರೆಗೂ ಕಾಯೋ ಆಸೆ
ಕಾರ್ತಿಕ್ ..
6 comments:
Karthi,
Sakkatt aagide kavana.
ee saalaMtu tuMbaa chennagide
"daDavu nadige ugamadiMda
kaDala sErO varegU kAyuvaMte "
Thanks Jyot..
hello karthik_c_s @yahoo.com,
do u remember me? am CHITRA here.
I know neenu nanna marthidiya antha.OK no probs ,,hey ninna kavana super aagide.how did u get that line 'nadiyu dadava.....'
Its superb........
nice imagination..It touched my heart.gud very gud.
take care bye.
Karthik,
You might have heard about "Apta Samvada".
It is a weekly bulletin of "Media Centre" chapter of Karnataka Pranth.
We don't have any website. But, we are planning to have a blog, where we can upload the whole bulletin.
And whole thing is in Kannada and we are finding difficulties in doing this.
I had seen your kannada poems and thought you might help us in this regard.
So, can you please give us some ideas, for this?
Regards,
Narendra
Good One Karthik. As somebody has already commented, the last paragraph is very nice.....
I am Ravi. Came across your blog while browsing for Kannada poems. I do write poems and have about 50 now.
Enjoyed your poem and so this comment.....
- Ravi.
Complete bakwaas. Time passge ella ok. hudgeer hatra hogloke bari madve aad mele mari.
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